Please give feedback on tattoo design

Hi guys, I would just like a little feed back on this design. The original is by someone by the name of taranthor. I altered it a bit but not much. I was thinking of having it on my back, with the tear drop going down my spine around 1/3 of the way.

It is the eye of Ra, symbolizing the sun, mathematics, reason and it also means for me to never have to look back.

What do you guys think?

Be honest please as this will be going on my body, permanently…

Hmmm…let me see…

OK. It’s nice!

hahaha ok, a little more input?

Does this particular design have a special meaning to you?

Most Heremetic in design. I like the classic design better, and would see it as being more suited as an arm tattoo IMO. At the very least keep the “tear length” proportional to the rest of the piece. Otherwise you defeat the mathematical symbolism it bears.

dont really like the ying yang symbol in the eye i dont think it suits the rest of the design but if thats what your wanting go for it!